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Friday, June 1, 2012

End of the Quarter Limerick

There once was a man named Bob,
Who searched and searched relentlessly for a job.
One day he drove to the mall
And found a store that sold baseballs.
Too bad that job went to his best friend, Rob.
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1 comment:

  1. DaveJune 2, 2012 at 9:43 AM

    Loving the thought here Rachel, but the sound seems a little bit off, no?

    Drop "relentlessly."

    For the final three, try:

    "So he drove to the mall,
    found a store that sold balls,
    But Bob lost that job to Rob."

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